I am free…. in a way you can never be
and nothing can possess me;
I'm free.
I am free…. like sun is, and moon rather wished it was
along with the waves of eternity;
I'm free.
I am free…. from whatever you say or preach
of all the things you want me to see;
I'm free.
I am free…. of the very bonds you tie yourselves in
but draw a stupid smile or an ambiguous grin;
I'm free.
I am free…. for I can breathe as long as I want
as even death defies me;
I'm free.
I am free…. to commit mistakes as long as I live
to unlearn the lessons of cyclical mystery;
I'm free.
I am free…. by the power vested in my lines
a bit of stagnant lies and ample honest signs;
I'm free.
I am free…. neither nonsensical everything nor sensible nothing
accountable to none and no one to me;
I'm free.
I am free…. under the stress named society
as well as indignant expectations and future almighty;
I'm free.
I am free…. within me, within you, within we
free from freedom plus heavier words such as these;
I'm free.
14 comments:
well said.
Last night, I saw Into the Wild second time....and now reading your words... I am free....like a road that never ends, like a wave that never stops....I am free, of the all the curses, of all the restrictions.....
Writer ,that's why you're an exceptional in writing because you're free! The most beautiful thing in this life is being free!
As always you got my not so precious time.
@Mayank: Thanks. :)
@Punit: That's one of my all-time-never-die favorite movie! ... thanks for adding to the verses.. beautifully you said there!
@Anon: Obliged as always. :)
Shakti...awesome piece of work <3
@Chintan. Thanks. Preciate your words. :)
nice 1.
I guess I should stop writing those boring lengthy blog posts and switch to poetry. Just kidding. Thanks. :)
not a bad idea.
he he he :-)
hii!
superb!
keep writing :D
great !!
Even on the verge of dropping dead with sleep , i feel free reading this ;)
Really nice !
@Adi Thanks yaar!
@Nimue I guess it's time i tried writing short stories with dialogues like you do. :)
And you think i do them well ?? *rubs eyes*
PS : second part of the story is up. Not sure if you checked :)
@Nimue I read it. Lovely finish.
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